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Individual essay. We had to write two weeks ago. However, some students didn't finish writing an individual essay yet. If students didn't finish writing that yet, Mr.Paterson deduct -1 point. According to the mail from him, he wanted to think and reflect on how we felt when we thought he was going to deduct those points.
He checked each essay and advised us. For instance, the URL of the essay shouldn't be so long, title and name have better to write in front and big size about fourteen. In addition, if someone's essay can't view, it's terrible. Many people had a mistake in the essay. He said that we must submit some reports like an essay until the deadline. And, said we hadn't better to write the essay all at once. He used the example of diet. He said, "If you eat the donut in five days in a week and go to the gym in only two days, it won't effect your body." 

After the checked every essay, he taught us about we need to write three reasons in a sentence. I thought that it's too hard for me to write like that. And, end of class. We heard unbelievable words. He said that we will do the presentation again....!!! I thought the presentation about improving school was already finished. Most of the classmates couldn't believe that. And then, Taisei (Kitajima) asked him to what size of base sentences and title. He answered base sentences are twelve sizes and the title is fourteen sizes. I want to value these points of the essay.

 

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