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Mr.Paterson taught us how to write an effective essay. We wrote the five paragraphs essay. Hook of the essay has to use quotations and statistics. In this mean, we have to show some references in the hook of the essay. I wrote the statistic in the essay and explain about it. In addition, a summary of the essay hasn't to references, because of nothing new in it. However, the conclusion and limitation have to use the reference. We should suggest how to solve the problem of your allegation.

 And, as last class, he said that we have to write 4-5 references in junior high school. Mr.Paterson explained that why we have to write it in junior high school with showed an example. The block has four angles, so we have to support it for four sticks. Thus, we should have four references in the essay. However, if there are many sticks like more 10 sticks, it's able to support more. Thus, we need to more references when writing the academics essay.

After the explanation about it, he showed a terrible essay and perfect essay in Toyo university. The terrible essay wasn't many references and too short. Mr.Paterson said that university students have to write an essay about 11 paragraphs. However, the student who wrote the terrible essay wrote only 5 paragraphs. And, another student who wrote the perfect essay has more than 20 references and wrote 11 paragraphs. I thought the essay is so complicated for me through this class because the essay has many rules like should use many references to explain your allegation. 

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